kevinelliott
lvl.4
Flight distance : 354131 ft
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Nice job cneedforspeed. Not that you're looking for feedback I had some thoughts.
Achievements:
* great choice in music
* clips are well synchronized to changes in beat and movement
* clips match tone and feeling in music progression
Suggestions to take to next level:
* too much irregular movement in clips -- try to keep things smoother -- do not change direction in same clip unless it has a strong purpose
* evoke a story, rather than seemingly random clips -- start with flying over a tall grass field, maybe have a little girl running in it, evoke a sense of innocence, then move into the decay
* show progressive footage of the abandoned buildings... show it at a distance in one clip, then show it closer in another, then fly over it in another, then show its surroundings in another, etc
I'm far from a professional! But like you I see such a potential for art. You've got a great concept. I would love to see you do this one again with more intensity.
Cheers! |
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