pritchiedotcom
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Flight distance : 125738 ft
United Kingdom
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Some interesting footage, especially the first clip (I really liked it, it was artistic). The only finesse point for me was due to it being a compilation, it come over a little confused (day, night, day, night). As a viewer I got distracted from enjoying it to thinking "What just happened?" (this is me sharing my thoughts and not a right or wrong). I would maybe try editing the different times of day together into a more natural flow. There is certainly some great footage there. Think about how you take your footage and what emotion it projects. eg. fast spinning pan projects drama, slow spinning pan project calm... good luck and thanks for sharing. It was enjoyable overall. |
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