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pritchiedotcom Posted at 2017-5-5 02:12
Interesting and enjoyable. May I suggest trying it the other two ways too? I appreciate you're following the 3rd guideline, however I feel this is one of those times to ignore it and go 50/50 as I believe for most of the video there is more interest on the ground than in the sky. I would even go as far as putting the sky on the 3rds. The problem/advantage with video is the scene changes. Where as with a still you can see exactly what is going to be in frame and frame it accordingly, with video this changes. As there is some interest in the sky I believe a 50/50 approach may actually work best.
For the video above I find myself looking more at the ground and wishing I could see more of it. I enjoyed watching it, so thanks for sharing.
I hope my comments help, they are my opinions and not intended as "you did it wrong", more.. try it like this and see if you like it more..
No, that was an awesome critique! Even after reading Drew's comment above I looked at it again and I wanted more of the ground as well. I know my rule of thirds, but I have noticed when I am flying I tend to forget things and concentrate of the tech stuff a little more. I think tonight we may have another sunset similar to that one - so I am going to try to get out there again and make a new one.. Thank you so much!!! |
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