DMX_MLT
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Malta
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RjMllr, I really like your Idea, the Video was nicely compossed but I would change 3 things.
1 ) Use ND Filters, like ND16, ISO 100, Shutter Speed 60 to achieve a more Cinematic Effect
2) Don't Rush with the Movements, the Gimbal and Drone Speed where too Fast for me, move Slowly like Butter to achieve more Cinematic Look
3) That Music man ! It sound like the Roman Empire is Marching ! Choose something like Chillout Music, Relax and Smooth, not Epic, the Scene had nothing Epic in it.
Sorry I had to critise you, buts thats how I am, I am Black on White, without critics you will NEVER make progress. You need to think about your video, analyze what I said and see if it applies to you. This doesnt mean I am right, or wrong, but this is the way I think. You need to think about your Audience too, something you like doesnt mean other like it.
For Commercial you need to do a Sacrifice and do thing you dont like, just to satisfy your Customers. I am a Graphic Designer myself and its my job.
To be appreciated you need to be Innovative, Create Unusual Things that People say ''WOW ! Thats New ! I Like It !'' and you need to address what in Trend. If Chillout Music is the Trend
of Today in Drone Videos, I agree with you you tried to do something you like, but was anything in the Video Epic ? eg. Climbing from behind trees and revealing Mount Everest ! And People walking on the Top of a Mountain waving to the Drone ? I only saw Field and Grass.
Thats my Opinion, as I want you to be Constructive from the Criticism. With criticism you will Become Strong and Improve, I can lie tell you 'THE BEST VIDEO I EVER SAW' but I will be lieing to you brother.
Keep up the Good Work, continue with your Will, as you seem Determined and will do a Great Drone Pilot. Good luck.
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