Montfrooij
Captain
Flight distance : 2560453 ft
Netherlands
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Nice first one.
Some things that I would suggest:
I love the music, but feel it does not suit your footage. I am visioning some fast moving landscape while flying above it or something. Not these random shots. (opinion of course)
Next: leave out these fast (unintentional) movements (gimbal or drone) and leave the good stuff in.
Also : make more various shots (like some high shots to introduce the location, some straight down shots etc.)
Maybe : leave out most of the shots with you two staring like you see a UFO
Most of all: tell a story (visually). Like you introduce the area with some overhead shots, make some nice visual shots straight down, some detail shots of you two walking from behind, introduce the bridge and leave with the sun in a high contrast back light shot. It takes a bit of thinking ahead, but that is the nice thing
You have the subject and some nice shots to do so you will make it work.
Love to see more from you! |
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