Hey there!

I am proudly presenting my first try in creating cinematic video footage. The short glimpse was shot on my Spark and Zhiyun Smooth Q gimbal during a quick visit yesterday afternoon at the Beaver Brook Reservation in Massachusetts.
Edited and color graded in Adobe Premiere Pro without LUTs.

I am always happy to receive feedback!



regards,
peselito

nice!
if would redo something would be inserting the "smiling girl" after the scene with "the girl playing hand in water". it would have more sense.
otherwise, nice edit.

dj_dread Posted at 2018-2-2 06:56
nice!
if would redo something would be inserting the "smiling girl" after the scene with "the girl playing hand in water". it would have more sense.
otherwise, nice edit.

Thank you for the feedback, sir! That's a good point. I have to admit I did not put much effort in the arrangement of the clips since my focus was on color grading the clips (I shot in a flat color profile in filmic pro).

Very nice footage

Nice footage you are certainly going in the right direction.

A few tips:
-Try keep the camera movements as smooth as possible, fly the drone slowly when near the ground keep it steady so you cant see the camera trying to steady itself
- the shot with the girl is good, always nice to have a subject in the frame, one way i think it might work better is to maybe do a vertical pan from her feet up to her face possibly cutting to another scene in between

Other than that i think youve done a great job.

seanie2322 Posted at 2018-2-2 12:26
Nice footage you are certainly going in the right direction.

A few tips:

Thanks for these tips! I will definitely try some of them out. The person pan is a great idea and I will do that in the following short films as she will be my travel buddy anyways ;)

I like the look!

Montfrooij Posted at 2018-2-2 14:20
I like the look!

Thank you. I am still learning the color profiles in Adobe Premiere and trying to shoot as much in flat color profile as possible.

Glad you like it!

peselito Posted at 2018-2-2 14:27
Thank you. I am still learning the color profiles in Adobe Premiere and trying to shoot as much in flat color profile as possible.

Glad you like it!

You're welcome.
Lot's of work, but nice to do!

Really nice footage . fun and easy to watch . Thank for sharing

Thanks for sharing, looks good. Unfortunately it reminds me how much I hate the cold.

As this was your first attempt I'd say you did quite well.  I think the music fit the scenery quite well.  Thanks for sharing.