Montfrooij
Captain
Flight distance : 2560453 ft
Netherlands
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Beautiful subject and great lighting
I think there is some room for improvement (my opinion of course).
- Your control settings have probably not been damped (start / stop of motion is abrupt, check for exp/gain settings to make for less abrupt start / stop)
- It looks like you have two dolly zoom effects in places that are not really working if you ask me. (in the middle of a shot, I would do that as a starter or ending)
- The pan in the end is not leading to something and could do with some simultaneous forward motion |
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