FredrikN
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StanfordWebbie Posted at 2018-4-30 17:18
A very lovely video and enjoyable watch. Since you asked, I have two suggestions:
1. The shot between :16 and :24 - consider going to slow motion there. Things passed just a tiny bit too quickly and there was a sign there that went by too quickly to read.
2. I've been doing lots of reading on videography and I've seen several pros advise to avoid or greatly limit transitions. When used, they advised a simple fade to black (as you did), but said to reserve that for major changes in either time or location. Just for grins, try removing all the transitions from your video. I'll bet you'll find it every bit as good. Also, notice when you're watching pro videos, movies, TV. You rarely see transitions used there.
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A very lovely video and enjoyable watch. Since you asked, I have two suggestions:
1. The shot between :16 and :24 - consider going to slow motion there. Things passed just a tiny bit too quickly and there was a sign there that went by too quickly to read.
2. I've been doing lots of reading on videography and I've seen several pros advise to avoid or greatly limit transitions. When used, they advised a simple fade to black (as you did), but said to reserve that for major changes in either time or location. Just for grins, try removing all the transitions from your video. I'll bet you'll find it every bit as good. Also, notice when you're watching pro videos, movies, TV. You rarely see transitions used there."
True, I did noticed that :16 and :24 was somewhat to fast after the editing was done. I agree with you. |
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