This is are short promotion videos for Shore Club in Turks& Caicos Isl.

The filming is done with my Inspire 1 and video montages are made by my friend.

You Should revise your Music. Also the promo video is to long. That same video can be shortened to about 30 sec and WOW more by giving them less to see at first.

Hope they have you back when they are done.  i agree with pidetectives, too long to have various of the same shot over and over. As a matter of fact, blending the 2 videos to 30 seconds would be lots better.

Nice videos!  Make the main video no longer than 1 minute and include more of the close-up shots so that we see all of your far/medium/close shots together. The music is fine unless you can find something contemporary that has more of an "island" theme.