Nice job for first go at it! I saw a few pan's that could have been smoother and one shot with heavy clouds that i thought was under exposed but other wise thought it was great! I know after making my first reel, within a couple weeks as my skills improved, i found so many things could be improved upon. Great start, and look forward to seeing your next project!
Here is my first video below, as you will see I made the same mistakes, its great to look back and see how far you have come!
Where are you located, I have been taking video in the bay area as well, maybe we can hook up. Be great to get video by the ocean (Cliff house) area. Let me know