Montfrooij
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Flight distance : 2560453 ft
Netherlands
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Very nice shots.
I have to say this is the hardest part of editing.
Removing everything that is not 95% right OR does not add anything to the story you want to tell.
I have given the video two looks and I think you can make it shorter (and more interesting to most viewers)
These shots might need some attention (my opinion of course)
0:28 transition with minimal changes between the shots. Delete one of them.
0:48 shot can be deleted, does not add much to the story, plus the motion is not very smooth.
1:18 shot can be deleted, not very smooth and almost the same as the previous shot.
1:30 shot can be deleted, not very smooth and almost the same as the next one. (which is better)
2:19 cut here, (when you stop moving backwards / up)
2:24 shot can be deleted, almost the same as 0:40 shot
2:32 shot can also be deleted.
That would make the video about half the length and still show a lot of beautiful shots
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