Hi Alex.
I think the only way to improve that would be to wait for better light. Not easy when time is money. Maybe get images of it arriving back at port from shore for a variation in ending sequence.
On the whole though action probably sells better. I liked the inclusion of close-up shallow depth of field shots. Despite it's name I had no idea of it's role. Would that be important to get across?
fansfe82067d Posted at 11-15 05:34
How lucky was that rainbow shot! (Or maybe you added it in post - in which case, don't admit it and spoil the illusion!)