malted muse
lvl.4
Flight distance : 213202 ft
United Kingdom
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Ok let's be honest. I presume that you posted it here because you want some constructive criticism so that you can improve - so here goes.
Pretty damn perfect as far as I can see. totally beautiful, attention grabbing and emotive. Not meant as a pun but - a bit of a cliff hanger inasmuch as it seemed to constantly bring new aspects into it. Only downside is that I wish I had the skill to have made it but so grateful for both the experience of it and what I can learn from it. |
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