Just thought I'd share a promo video I made for the school my wife works at. The gorgeous campus deserved some aerial videography so I gave it a shot. Check it out and see what you think. Sountrack: "Home" Artist" Lights & Motion Album: Reanimotion.

Looks very good. Well done.

I honestly enjoyed looking at that one ... smooth flying and you got some really nice compositions ...

One thing I would do different is ... the football shoots ... the girls by the flag post ... and the persons walking down the road ... I wouldn´t have separated them on the timeline ... I would have put the clips next to each other ... but that´s probably a matter of taste ... ;)

All and all ... looks a lot like a professional at work !  

Some excellent work there Phdraw.
I'd only suggest that you have a look at the chronology of the segments in the light of of the narrative you are seeking to create.
It jumps around a bit and you have some duplication of locations and scenes.

One of the things that Jim here on the forums taught me was the criticality of being completely ruthless in the edit - keep it to the most pertinent and amazing shots, always referring back to the story/message you are telling.

Looks like an awesome school and you've done really well in capturing the amazing location.

Nice work

Farnk666 Posted at 2015-7-26 03:54
Some excellent work there Phdraw.
I'd only suggest that you have a look at the chronology of the segments in the light of of the narrative you are seeking to create.
It jumps around a bit and you have some duplication of locations and scenes.

Totally agree fabulous job, but less is more.  Editing down is often the toughest, but it really cb make the video more impactful.