Tasos GR
Second Officer
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Marty Markoe Posted at 9-17 02:46
Good opening scene cohesiveness up to 31 seconds. Clips after seem to jump around and be disconnected. Nice to see your video eye evolving.
Technique I've developed over the years is to create a work, mostly photographic, look at what seems finished. Then step out of the personal creation of the piece and make believe I'm someone else. At this point asking if the work is engaging or are there distractions weakening the piece of art and make changes accordingly. For example, I'd look at clip of peninsula at 35-40 seconds and remove it. There are several other clips that can be dealt with likewise.
Thank you very much for the suggestions, I will take them into account |
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