Montfrooij
Captain
Flight distance : 2560453 ft
Netherlands
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Nice footage!
I personally found the edit a bit too jumpy.
I would consider adding some longer cuts and not too much jumping between locations.
The music is nice and builds up, so you could do the same with the footage (starting with longer cuts, ending with shorter ones).
Finally, it feels like a random collection of beautiful shots.
It would be even better if it would tell a story.
Maybe something like 'from the beautiful shores of....' (showing those shots)
'to the ever busy port of .....' (showing the vessel shots)
etc. etc.
So we (the viewers) are taken on a small journey. |
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