Mzp
Core User of DJI
United States
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Hi Maritime, that's a nice video , it seems you put a lot of work into it. Since you are asking for constructive criticism, love the way it was shot and how you graded it it as well as music choice and special effects. I am not sure if it's supposed to be this way since it's reel and maybe unfinished work since you mentioned that, but what I'm finding it does not have a story, it is sort of all over the place, it seems to jump from one shot to another and in different areas of the world as well. If this is a promotional video, I am not an expert and don't claim to be, maybe it would help to add prompts to clue audience to what they are seeing and to help create a story , for instance "Boat rides here are just the norm..." and then you show the boat rides, you know what I mean, so it looks more like a story telling with prompts simulating narration. Also you had one of those text prompts on the screen in one of the scenes, but it was shown so fast , it was impossible to read. I am thinking along the lines of black screen with large text messages describes what people would enjoy in the specific scenes that would follow. Hope this helps. Otherwise great work, really liking it. Take care. Thanks, Mike. |
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