Albatross911
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4wesomeAdam Posted at 2017-1-10 03:33
I like at 2:53 when you catch the reflection of the city in the glass of the tram tower. Your video also highlights the beauty of the tram tower, corresponding buildings and grounds very well.
Artistic constructive criticism: at 0:55 we get this stunning plush valley which leads to a body of water and buildings and ships in the distance. If there was more of a transition where there was a pan from what we were looking at in the beginning to that view, it would give the audience some bearing of what or where they are looking. For example, film the buildings and then pan over to that direction, so your audience can see and deduct that this is the view from a different angle. When you cut to the valley, my mind started wondering is this a different area, wait where is this? Art triggers emotions, and here I am on this majestic aerial ride with majestic music feeling good and then boom, confusion.
hi 4A, no I won't take your advice personally and greatly appreciate your feedback! Indeed upon re-viewing the video that particular clip is being inconsistent with the connecting clips. I'll see if I can change that part out and replace with another to improve it, and make sure I pay attention to that in future editing.
Again thanks! |
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