PKPhantom
Second Officer
Flight distance : 275276 ft
United States
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Very very nice footage. Pretty dang' good for a 'first flight' pilot. Just a couple of 'critic' pointers. Not a big deal though.
1) I''m sure you were trying to capture ALL angles of your subject with an intended purpose to fit the entire footage within the song. That's good. But then in some of the spectacular scenes, the shot was very fast. If you could have maintained entire footage the same speed as your first 5 seconds that would have beeen a lot better. To me, I would rather view half the footage but at more detail (slower speed) vs the entire video at a relatively faster speed.
2) Second critic, not really a big deal either. The way you introduced the ship wreckage was simply phenomenal. At first, I couldn't tell exactly if the wreckage was lost at sea or somewhere in an abandoned island. You kept the viewer in suspense up until you revealed the shot with the houses, cars and roads in the background. If you could have somehow ommited that shot, curiousity would have left a lot of people with questions. Just the same way a Hollywood 'Mars' movie could be shot in the Nevada desert but the shot angles do not reveal background material like 'Las Vegas City' or the obvious Nevada LandScapes.
Again, job well done. I am anxious to see your second video.
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