DanielC
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Flight distance : 665682 ft
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StanfordWebbie Posted at 2017-9-15 15:22
Nice flying, great subject matter, very appropriate music. I'll make two recommendations: First, you've got several scenes in there that are only 1 or 2 seconds long. I found that a bit distracting. The scenes that went 4 to 5 seconds were much more compelling. Second, several transitions were "fade to black" and I quickly came to not love those. Some others were smoother transitions from one scene to another. I found that I liked that better. Hope you aren't offended - just my reaction to your good video.
HI StanfordWebbie,
I appreciate your comment and time. As of now I'm still improving when it comes to making films.
Don't worry no offense taken.
God Bless Mate. |
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