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Really nice video. I've been doing tons of reading and tutorials on videography. Things my reading says you did right:
1. Short clips. Pros recommend 1-5 seconds between cuts.
2 No transitions: Pros say transitions scream "amateur". One did say use them for major changes in time or location.
3. Good color, good background music.
Recommendations:
1. Opening shots should give your viewers a sense of where you are. The scenes that begin at about the 1:55 mark would have been good openers.
2. Shorten the length. Pros recommend 1 to 3 minutes. Challenge every clip that you have and ask yourself if the video would be just as good without it. I cut about 80% of what I film. |
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