First time putting together a bunch of clips into a video.  Really curious as to what you all might think.  I welcome constructive critisism - or however ya spell it! LOL

Enjoy

Fireworks look Really Great ! Welldone.

Nice video.  I can offer one bit of friendly criticism (since you asked); edit out the parts where you're adjusting the drone position, ideally you want nice, smooth shots without any real direction/angle changes.  The jerkiness of the drone movement kinda takes you out of the moment, it's something I'm still learning with though as it's sometimes easier said than done.

Thx Brandon.  
I took out a LOT of that jerky motion through much of the video.  I know there were some portions left; but cutting them out I think made the video worse (too many 'cuts' IMHO).
But I agree with you completely.  Those sections of the video do take you out of the moment.

i like how you captured the fireworks but i am not a big fan of using stills into a video. just my personal preference
otherwise, pretty good for your first!

Thanks DJ

I'll repeat the point about the camera movements, and the fireworks were too long for me, but otherwise, nice first video. You and the other kids had some fun with the Spark.

Yes we did have fun.  I was actually planning on trying out the active track and just walking around the park area myself.  
But all the kids were loving seeing it fly and chase them I let them do all the running! HA!  Worked for me!  I got my experience with the active track function and didn't have to move a muscle! LOL

Great video!!

Really a great job! Loved the creativity!

very nice

great shot

Overall I think you have some nice shots here is my 2 cents.....

1. Video is a bit long. I would make separate movies about the fireworks and the jump house.
2. For the fireworks may I suggest some more inspiring music, It should be invigorating.
3. Edit out the sections where you are setting up the shots as they jerk around a bit.
4. Refrain from using the transitions.  Try to stick with just straight cuts.
5. Fancy transitions should be kept to a bare minimum. Excessive use looks amateur.

The fireworks clips are good and interesting make them tell a story.

Overall some nice video I would just recommend some additional editing.

Sidd

Thanks for the pointers Sid
i will keep that in mind for future editing

This time around I was just happy to get something together HAHA

cool stuff love the fireworks