Montfrooij
Captain
Flight distance : 2560453 ft
Netherlands
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Very good work!
I really like your style.
Nice colors, good music, nice moves!
Some minor things I noticed (all very personal of course):
- The speed effect feels a bit over used, I would skip most 'small' ones like the one at 0:43 . (0:55 is perfect btw)
- 1:09, there seems to be a slight glitch before the transition.
- 1:16 the transition is not on the 1st bar. (most others are)
- 1:18 strange movement in the shot (a wobble or something)
- 1:21 that feels like a perfect moment for a transition
- 1:36, not a natural moment for one
- 1:48 transition on 4th bar, feels unnatural for me
- 1:51 the skips are right before the big hits in the background track. Is that on purpose (it looks like you made it to fit ON the hits)
(same a couple of seconds later)
Actually, looking back on my suggestions : it looks like your video is not in sync with the music from 1:21 or so?
But I might be very wrong of course!
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