Yeah as others have stated the watermark lets it down as it distracts too much. But as first attempts go, good job and welcome to the forum and look forward to seeing more from you.
Nicely done. I agree with most other Forum users. No need for the watermark- i doubt any of us would steal your photo. We might try and take a similar one, but no need to bootleg someone else. Fly safe and keep up the good work. My page