First Crack At A Reveal - Feedback Appreciated
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Red Zeppelin
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After much lurking and learning from the good people here, my first submission. Would appreciate any constructive feedback ;-)



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RZ
2019-2-28
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DJI Paladin
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Hi Red Zeppelin, nicely done! Thanks for sharing.
2019-2-28
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Tentoes
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Beautiful sunset. Nice how you have the tree silhouetted.
2019-2-28
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Sayhelloforme
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Nicely done. Great reviled footage. Thanks for sharing.
2019-2-28
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maddox
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Lovely sunset! Nicely done, great job!
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MccloudSpark
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You just cannot go wrong with a sunset!  The tree silhouette provides a nice character.
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snowbird pilot
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this is really cool !
2019-2-28
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nilanjan118
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Not much of a "reveal" due to the fading light but the sunset hues look beautiful. Nice shot.
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Woe
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Very nice well done.
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Arnie R
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Nicely done.
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Red Zeppelin
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nilanjan118 Posted at 2-28 17:52
Not much of a "reveal" due to the fading light but the sunset hues look beautiful. Nice shot.

Thanks for the comment. The reveal was referring to the sunset
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A CW
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Excellent footage
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Rustic17
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Great shot...simple but very effective!!!
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weseli
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Nice video, i would like to be longer so i can enjoy longer
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Red Zeppelin
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weseli Posted at 2-28 23:57
Nice video, i would like to be longer so i can enjoy longer

Thanks so much. I do have a longer edit where I did a re-run of the shot while moving forward through the trees, but it's not as stable and I wanted to keep the video relatively short.

Thanks again for the kind words though
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ChrisJG
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Well done, I liked it, very stable, were you in tripod mode?
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Lysak2003
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Well done!
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Red Zeppelin
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ChrisJG Posted at 3-1 04:27
Well done, I liked it, very stable, were you in tripod mode?

Thanks Chris - yes Tripod mode
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pmshop
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Excellent reveal.
That went better than my "famous" reveal in Las Vegas:
2019-3-1
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spookster
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the horizon could be a tad lower. too much is in darkness, otherwise great shot.
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Red Zeppelin
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spookster Posted at 3-2 03:11
the horizon could be a tad lower. too much is in darkness, otherwise great shot.

Good pointer thanks

I'll keep it in mind for future shots.
2019-3-14
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Sidd Finch
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I liked your video with some recommendations. The liftoff is good for the first :21 seconds. I would suggest repeating this from a different angle or from a different perspective set of trees. Maybe 1 tree in the shot, then 2 trees in the shot, then three etc. IMO the Noir effect is what I would go for. The sunset is not that spectacular but the contrast with the tree branches is. You might even try to get some wrap around shots of the tree silhouetted as it is rising up.

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