Montfrooij
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SLiWooDy Posted at 3-18 08:22
Thank you, some good constructive criticism there. I am always looking to improve.
The Bridge scene was filmed about 2 months ago, and I showed a friend the clip and they said it looks very serious, you should make a video around that clip. I floated around lots of ideas, lots of different music ideas and footage, and well fast forward 2 months and that's the end result.
It took a lot of putting on the same clothes, lots of hoping for grey days (in England that wasn't that hard) and recording the scenes when i got the chance.
Sorry for not replying sooner (you did not hit the 'reply' link below my answer, so I did not get a notification)
My pleasure!
The first (preparation) part is building tension super well.
But when you start walking outside I miss that.
Not sure what you can do about it (I'm not a director ) but it felt like it lacked a message.
Maybe if you included more close up shots of you taking some shots (hands on the controller etc.) and some of your silhouette scouting looking for subjects to film. Holding your hands in this 'frame' way (you know as photographers do when making a composition).
That kind of things.
But, as I said, I'm not a director, just some wild ideas
Plus, it is really nitpicking, as it is already a very good video! |
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