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Sidd Finch Posted at 2018-3-22 07:26
This was a nice video. A couple of suggestions per your request.
The views are really nice. If you are going to do things in sport mode and fist I would suggest that you show multiple angles of the same location. For example you are over a field, cut, you are over water, cut you are over something else, cut you are back over the field. I would show 3 different cuts of the same field before you move into the next group of shots. To the viewer it looks like a bunch of random shots that are all nice but it does not really tell a story. Grouping the shots of the same location gives the viewer a sense of continuity so they get a sense of the entire area. By watching I do not have a sense of what is connected to what.
Thanks a lot Sidd Finch for your comment, you are absolutely right, I must confess that I did rush a bit on the editing as I was short on time and I wanted to finish the video so I could upload it to my YT channel. At first I thought it was ok, just a bit different but there was something I just could not point out what it was that feld a bit wrong/weird, and now you just did point it out for me and that's the inconnection on the editing. For me it looks ok because I know the place but if I had to tell you as a viewer from another country (which you are) about this place, then I should have edited the video in a different way...so thanks for reminding me that I have to do the editing with no rush next time. ;-) |
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