Thought I'd post this up.   My first time ever editing ANYTHING.   I'd appreciate the feedback from the pro's.

really nice    keep going

Need to be a little smoother with YAW and camera tilt ( I reduce the sensitivity of my tilt in the App.. ) but other than that looks good.. Was the landing part sped up or did you land that quickly

you did your first flight over water... you brave, brave man!! phew... I'm still very catious over anything wet or around trees... :-)

Hi-ho..

nice work for your first edit!

Two suggestions I'd have:

Smoother yaw / tilt as as sploodge said.

And, try to have the clips/cuts link together.

In places you go from a flying straight over water shot to climbing towards the town, then descending over water to a sudden pan over the water again...

As a viewer I'm confused about where I'm going, and what I'm looking at.  Take the viewer on a journey somewhere, then bring them home.  Don't whip them all over the show. :-)

( Please accept this as creative critique you've done really well if this is the first time you've done any video editing! )

Cheers, Chris H.

jon.godfrey Posted at 2015-6-10 15:51
you did your first flight over water... you brave, brave man!! phew... I'm still very catious over a ...

no.....not my first flight ever.   the filming and edit is the only first.  I was very aware of where I was at and my landing points the whole way.  

kiwichrish Posted at 2015-6-10 16:16
Hi-ho..

nice work for your first edit!

Absolutely,  thank you for the details.    I definitely am looking for constructive criticism.   It's the only way I'll get better....short of taking a course.   Which I really don't have time to do.  Thanks again.

sploodge Posted at 2015-6-10 14:35
Need to be a little smoother with YAW and camera tilt ( I reduce the sensitivity of my tilt in the A ...

thanks, sploodge.   ummmm....that landing really was that quick.  It was real time.  It was film from my first flight with the P3.   I really put it in to remind myself about ensuring I know what is going on ....  and, how far I've come with the drone since that first flight.

Emphasis on editing.....my second attempt using the exact same material....