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MikeAngelo
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Thought I'd post this up.   My first time ever editing ANYTHING.   I'd appreciate the feedback from the pro's.



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yasrooh
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really nice    keep going
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sploodge
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Need to be a little smoother with YAW and camera tilt ( I reduce the sensitivity of my tilt in the App.. ) but other than that looks good.. Was the landing part sped up or did you land that quickly
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jon.godfrey
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you did your first flight over water... you brave, brave man!! phew... I'm still very catious over anything wet or around trees... :-)
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kiwichrish
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Hi-ho..

nice work for your first edit!

Two suggestions I'd have:

Smoother yaw / tilt as as sploodge said.

And, try to have the clips/cuts link together.

In places you go from a flying straight over water shot to climbing towards the town, then descending over water to a sudden pan over the water again...

As a viewer I'm confused about where I'm going, and what I'm looking at.  Take the viewer on a journey somewhere, then bring them home.  Don't whip them all over the show. :-)

( Please accept this as creative critique you've done really well if this is the first time you've done any video editing! )

Cheers, Chris H.
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MikeAngelo
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jon.godfrey Posted at 2015-6-10 15:51
you did your first flight over water... you brave, brave man!! phew... I'm still very catious over a ...

no.....not my first flight ever.   the filming and edit is the only first.  I was very aware of where I was at and my landing points the whole way.  
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MikeAngelo
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kiwichrish Posted at 2015-6-10 16:16
Hi-ho..

nice work for your first edit!

Absolutely,  thank you for the details.    I definitely am looking for constructive criticism.   It's the only way I'll get better....short of taking a course.   Which I really don't have time to do.  Thanks again.
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MikeAngelo
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sploodge Posted at 2015-6-10 14:35
Need to be a little smoother with YAW and camera tilt ( I reduce the sensitivity of my tilt in the A ...

thanks, sploodge.   ummmm....that landing really was that quick.  It was real time.  It was film from my first flight with the P3.   I really put it in to remind myself about ensuring I know what is going on ....  and, how far I've come with the drone since that first flight.
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MikeAngelo
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Emphasis on editing.....my second attempt using the exact same material....


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