Phuglie
Second Officer
Flight distance : 45226 ft
United Kingdom
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I just can't resist...
Talking of grammar; "I am afraid there is a lot of language barrier." should read, "I am afraid THAT there is a language barrier." 'a lot of' is superfluous in this sentence. Next sentence "you just need to look at some of the web content that dji put out for this new fw." you must start a sentence with a CAPITAL LETTER, "You only ('only' is preferable to just in this context) need to look at some of the web content that DJI (this is their name and should be all in CAPS) publish ('put out' too colloquial) for their (not 'this') new (would prefer 'latest') firmware (in full or in CAPS, ie FW).". Final sentence "The grammar is poor in places, so you can imagine how instructions can get lost (would prefer get corrupted) in translation!!"
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