hypnotist
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To my ears, you're slightly to early on some of the transitions. Listen to the drum beats. Those are what you want to sync to as they are the backbone of the music and will feel more natural when you sync your cuts with them, at least to western ears.
Also, the music is mostly in 4/4 time and you switch on 2 or 4 it seems. Again, this is probably more natural for you, but would be the opposite for western music and transitions happen on 1 and 3.
You may also wish to add the element of speed in your video too. Speeding up or slowing down the video itself is another way to keep engagement high. It adds something interesting since your subject is not moving.
Varying the angles more between shots can help too. There are various cuts you make that are similar heights, but just slightly different angles. You also have some top down ones and those look great. Spread them out more between the other ones and it will seem more interesting.
Thoughts from an editor friend who is sitting next to me. |
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