The lupine is nice but I found your video to be a little out of focus.

Nice, is there a reason you did not record it in 4K?

VRAM limitation restricts me, unfortunately. Thanks

Lupine is lovely, but as said it's a bit OoF.

I'll make 2 other observations:
1) the choice of music doesn't fit the scene
2) try using "reveals" to add some tension/drama to the shots.

Thanks much for the comments. It really helps.